I loved you Typography... but the art is like the google... And I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED! Omgf i dont have words for u work... alslsalsalaslkas.... You need work in the google doodles ... i cry. . . L_L Now i will say of u work:
Shades, good... I loved the way of u do the cel shading... Vision: Good.... Originality 4.5, because of it's like the google doodles... sorry if u do works like doodles of google... i dont see u total art. Technique, OMGF IM DEAD, DIE Impact: OMGFFFFFFFFF THIS I APOLOGISE YOU ... THATS IS .... omgf i die here i DONT HAVE WORDS.... sorry for my shit critique.
I really like the idea and the colours. They are all well chosen and nothing falls into the background/is lost from the detail.
I adore the moon and clouds for some reason- the style is really lovely there, and adds some personality so it's a unique typography picture, and not...impersonal and stagnant like so many are.
The critique I have is I had to focus really hard to see the letters; too many of the individual letters go out of the letter "constraints" e.g the tree T has three trunks and so it's a bit confusing. The R also isn't very clear because the spider web sinks in to the background a little bit more than the mushroom does. Also the E hasn't got a very defined bottom part, like E does...etc.
I adore the shading and how high contrast it is and the few colours you've used to shade things. Contrasts are something a lot of artists fear but you used them wonderfully here.
Overall I think this is awesome and quirky but it could have done with some adjusting the objects more to look like the letters. And grats on the DD, dude. <3 Keep being awesome!
Really well done, I like the freedom used to represent the letterforms, and the attention to detail! That aside, the colors also really work well together. That the T and R are not that readable are no issue, you never read all the letters anyway!
thanks a lot! nice comments :] i agree, the letters wouldn't necessarily read by themselves, but i decided it only mattered that it read as a whole. i'm glad that it succeeds in that way. thanks again!